NOW MORE THAN EVER IN THIS WINTER COLD WEATHER I WISH THAT I COULD IN BRYCE(AZ) THAT WOULD BE SO SO NICE AND BASK IN THE SUN THAT WOULD BE REAL FUN BUT TILL THEN I JUST DREAM
i think u're majorly talented and im probably one of your biggest fans (if not the biggest- but size isnt everything, lol), but i do think u need to proofread some of your poetry before posting it- some simple additions (like of the word "be" in some places) would make this A+ material (get the corniness of that? word "be" and A+ material- im such a loser!)
i think u're majorly talented and im probably one of your biggest fans (if not the biggest- but size isnt everything, lol), but i do think u need to proofread some of your poetry before posting it- some simple additions (like of the word "be" in some places) would make this A+ material (get the corniness of that? word "be" and A+ material- im such a loser!)
ReplyDeletethank you for your advice ....let me proof read this...i think its ok lol love ya
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